Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Blog Assessment

              Click here to see the blog where i had one of the better posts. This is a good posts because i used many connections to the theme and character traits. I also believe that with the foreshadowing will help the overall effectiveness of the blog. This blog was mainly focused around the character of Eragon and this show big chance from the beginning to the end of the blog. I also became more descriptive and focused around certain points.
              I think that next trimester I should finish a book or even two. I also want to improve my writing skills and hopefully get good grades on papers. I could improve by reading more and accepting of advice and revising the papers more. I could also be more concentrated while reading and it will help my comprehension skills.
Eragon is going twords the center of the empire in serch of the creatures who killed his uncle. The people do not like dragons running around so they have to keep Saphira outside the sight of the people in the main citys and villages they pass through. This is important to the story for she is young and small so she will hide alot better, but the bigger she grows they might fear her more, and they can get around easier.
I think that Eragon will get in trouble somewhere along the way. They obviously aren't safe because they are moving city to city and are traveling with Brom and they will surely run into a bad person somewhere i just am not sure where.
I am not sure why Eragon is not very good at communicating yet with Saphira .They talk all the time. They seem pretty good but they can read thhoughts yet.